1000 years have passed since the legend of Babylon 5. Earth, now a sparsely populated
wasteland, is slowly being rebuilt with the help of the Rangers and the ISA.
Meanwhile the Rangers are fighting a war against the Drakh and their allies that has
lasted the past 1000 years.
Ever since that first attack on Earth it has been the same pattern taking place. The
Drakh attack ISA members in sudden and massive assaults that are driven back or
stopped en route and they are pursued to their bases and destroyed, for a time there is
peace and security and then they attack again.
Despite the ISA's best efforts and pouring huge resource into intelligence, they have
been unable to stop the Drakh. The problem is that all Drakh believe the ISA are the
enemy and none will betray their leaders or the ideology that the Shadows gave them.
The Drakh have also learnt the Shadows great patience, they wait silently, hidden for
decades or centuries and then strike when the ISA are at their weakest, hoping to
fracture the great Alliance and seed the galaxy with chaos once more.
The ISA had tried everything to change the mentality of the Drakh, even abducting young
and trying to educate them on ISA worlds. It all proved useless. The Drakh had been
genetically altered by the Shadows so that their belief in the cause was built right into
their genetic blue print. Nothing the ISA had could change this.
After a thousand years of fighting the ISA has had enough. After so many dead and no
end in sight, the member worlds vote.
1) The Rangers will capture a small sustainable colony of Drakh, forcibly
disarm them and create a secure facility that can hold them indefinitely
until such time as they can be re-educated and integrated into ISA society.
2) Breeding of this colony will be strictly controlled and any unauthorised
Drakh life will be terminated.
3) All Drakh not held within this facility are to be terminated.
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The first episode starts with the blurb and cuts to the council chambers for the finality of
discussion and then the vote.
Next it goes to some guy in Ranger Command (so to speak) that is being briefed by the
president. This guy is our head military dude and will assemble the forces and control
the dirty stuff. He will be of high rank and questionable past. He needs to be a guy that
will get his hand dirty and will get the job done. He should also be honourable in that he
does not try to pin his choices on others. This will make people not only respect him but
prevent them from liking him. Kind of a Bester in charge type gig. Officially he will be in
charge of the prison facility but we will get the idea from the briefing that the President
would like him to do more. He is than meet by some Intelligence goons who hook him
up with a butt load of cash and weapons, plus contacts to a bunch of killers and other
seedy criminals.
I would like to find a way to make that the first episode and leave a sense of worry about
where things are heading.
The show would be the same format as B5 time wise; 1 year story is 1 year viewing. I would
say the more episodes a year the better but you know, 24ish sounds good.
Season 1 – Character Setup
We will introduce Mr Ranger Douche
We will introduce Mr President
We will introduce a team of 5 that are hunting Drakh. They are mercenaries and are just
mean nasty SOBs. They be rollin in their own pimpen custom ride thanks to the ISA too.
We will introduce Ranger One who is unaware of these mercenaries or Mr Douches
“larger mission”. He is opposed to the actions the ISA are taking. He is hoping that he
can change the minds of the member worlds before the ISA tries to force him and his
Rangers to kill Drakh indiscriminately.
We introduce Ranger One’s secret team who are setup to find out who is behind the
destruction of some Drakh colonies and execution of Drakh civilians.
These intros all take place during season 1. We close season 1 with Ranger One putting
his team together.
Most of season 1 would be about the mercs and their bloodlust, Ranger One’s quest to
stop this genocide and also dropped in would be seemingly random episodes about
different Rangers. These Rangers would then come together at the end of season 1 to
form Ranger One’s team.
The story will be about the hard choices of war and facing ones humanity.
It will ask questions like;
What if there was NO chance of peace with your enemy?
What is the price to maintain your humanity?
Can you be a free civilized society without threat?
Are you willing to sacrifice your humanity for security?
I see this series as giving people some small reason to feel sympathy for the Drakh,
showing them as pawns of the Shadows even 1000 years after they left.
I also see it as still maintaining the Drakh as the bad guys and Mr Douche, like Bester,
just someone who believes they are doing the right thing but has a seriously messed up
moral compass.
The President is just a politician doing what his advisors recommend (Like all of them)
The Intel Goons are doing what they do, which is plan on how to take stuff over or kill
people.
5 year ark seems enough to flush out a good story. We have the two masters and their
teams setting us up for conflict we also have the hidden hand of the Intel Goons with the
President which lets all different angles get played.
Question is what happens? Do they eradicate the Drakh or does Ranger One get his
support and force the ISA to change its policy? OORRrrrrrr does Ranger One perform a
military coup to prevent this from happening? Or.....