OK, I finally got permission to post this. It lists the differences between Dell's "The Shadow Within" (B5 Book#7) and Del Rey's printing of "The Shadow Within."
From Jeanne Cavelos (July 30, 2002):
KoshN,
Hi. Nice hearing from you. Gee, that rumor sounds very
tantalizing. Unfortunately, the changes being made between the
Dell edition and the Del Rey edition are extremely minor. There
were four things that I asked Del Rey to change from Dell's first
printing of THE SHADOW WITHIN, and they agreed to all four.
First, I asked them to change the first page of the book (p. i)
from an excerpt (which gives away part of the plot) to a page of
review quotes. I think review quotes (if they're available and
if they're good) are more helpful in selling a book than an
excerpt. The book received many really strong reviews, so I
asked Dell to make this change in their later printings, but they
refused, since it costs extra to make changes.
Second, I asked Del Rey to correct the T. S. Eliot quote (on p.
1), which I'd screwed up in the Dell first printing. Later Dell
printings had this corrected.
Third, I asked them to correct a small error on p. 20, where I
mentioned Donne's name before Anna Sheridan (the point-of-view
character) learns Donne's name. This error probably arose as I
revised the manuscript before turning it in to Dell. It was
pointed out to me by a reader, and I've been waiting for an
opportunity to fix it ever since.
Fourth, my bio was supposed to be included in the Dell edition
and it never was, so I asked Del Rey to add that.
Those are all the changes I requested. The Del Rey edition will
have a new cover, of course. They sent me a copy a few weeks ago
and it looks really cool. I'll try to get that up on my website
within the next month.
Best,
Jeanne
jcavelos@sff.net
www.sff.net/people/jcavelos
----- Original Message -----
From: KoshN
To: Jeanne Cavelos <jcavelos@mindspring.com>
Sent: Monday, July 29, 2002 8:40 PM
Subject: Regarding the Del Rey publication of "The Shadow Within"
> Regarding the Del Rey publication of "The Shadow Within," can
you comment on
> the following?
>
> > 2) That Jeanne Cavelos had told Del Rey that some sort of
editorial
> > screw-up had led to something being left out of the original
edition of
> > "The Shadow Within" and that Del Rey is working from the
original
> > manuscript to restore whatever it was.
>
> KoshN