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Rangers Redux (fiction)

The main Anla'shok facility in Tuzanor was an architectural mess. Baby-blue crystal towers melded with a darker, post-war sensibility, and the original buildings had long been swallowed in the ballooning need renovation, and the human craving for expansion. Half of the facility burned in the Minbari Civil War, and the designers had left a section in ruins as a "memorial," while nearby workers were currently completing the new additions Delenn had commissioned. Everywhere, a new architectural masterpiece touched the sky - everywhere, the dark, post-war material threatened to overthrow the old crystal innocence that had once characterized the Anla'shok holdings before Sinclair.

Inside, it wasn't much better. In many cases, different buildings from different ages were melded together with little regard for interior design, and the result was a color scheme that sometimes, in Martel's opinion, approached schizophrenia.


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(more later. gotta go to work!)
 
Never mind, I thought I was an hour ahead of where I actually was. Ha ha ha...

-- -- --

Martel was mentally pondering, once again, the strange color palette the Minbari found beautiful (it wasn't his first choice for interior decoration), when he noticed that Cantrell was no longer by his side. He turned on his heel to watch her pushing open the door to the mess hall.

"Sarah?" he called after her, following. "Um,
Liandra?"

She grinned. "Give me a minute. I'm going to see if they have any bagels."

"They never have bagels," he responded - more to Sarah's deaf back than to Sarah herself - but sighed, following her, admitting to himself that he could probably use a spot of dinner.

The mess hall, packed to the gills as it always was with trainees, off-duty personnel, and the occasional facility desk-jobber, smelled a bit like burnt gok. He pushed his way up the center aisle to join his weapons officer (who was taste-testing the flarn), and was in the middle of loading up a plate of the greyish mush himself when he noticed that something was wrong.

This wasn't a new feeling.

"Sarah, don't look now," he muttered.

She nodded, upending a container of seasoning onto her plate. "I noticed." She licked her fingers, and moved down the line, as the seventy eyes currently seated in the mess hall focused themselves on the unreachable space between Martel's shoulder blades.

Martel wasn't used to being this notorious.

Before the incident on the Enfalli, he had been considered a promising young officer, fairly popular and well-known to the point where Rangers he didn't know hailed him by name in the hallway as he passed. The Council had his name on the short list. Sarah had been right - the Valen would have been his.

Now, however - no matter what the Council said, no matter if he had been cleared, given G'Kar's blessing, or even if he had been anointed
alu by Entil'zha herself in the Cathedral - in the mess hall, they remembered the Enfalli.

The eyes on his back were not approving. They spoke, wordlessly, of cowardice.

He knew they whispered of the Liandra, and of his crew. Of Dulann, whose unconditional support caused him to be called 'Martel's lap-dog'; of Na'feel and Tirk, who they said he had taken on simply out of 'pity'; of Kitaro, the 'incompetent'; and of Sarah, to whom barracks opinion had not been kind. She and Martel were just too close, they said. Spent too much time talking together on that balcony.

Give me a ship, give me a denn'bok, give me anything but this, he thought.
 
Cantrell had just reached the end of the serving line when she turned around and spied a familiar face standing in the back of the room.

"David, Malcolm's at the door," she mentioned, sliding some fruit into her pocket.

"Good," he said. He was busy putting a travel top on the flarn - something Cantrell had obviously overlooked. Or, she ruminated, he's picking his battles again.

"You're not going to eat here?" she asked.

He raised his eyebrows, tossed her a travel top, and shook his head. "Not likely. Plenty to do back at the barn."

"You can win this one, David," she urged. "It doesn't matter. Sit and eat."

He smirked. "Sure, I can win this one. I just have three system overhauls to run by launchdate, I'm dying to know what the suits just asked Malcolm, and I'd rather get all that done as soon as possible so I can get a decent night's sleep. Not to mention that you have a new console array to install by the time I wake up. So. Ready to face the music?"

Cantrell shrugged and nodded, and captain and weapons officer turned to walk down the center aisle.
 
Ok. Check the 8/03/02 12:41 post; I fixed some of the bad grammar and added a bit of detail here and there. Nothing's changed but the ease of reading.

EDIT: Changed Cantrell's destination in this one.

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Exactly three point eight miles away, the most controversial woman in modern politics left her son with the nanny and joined the Narn Regime's resident prophet for a business dinner. If David Martel knew of what they spoke - knew, actually, that he was the unofficial topic of that evening's conversation - he might have then passed Mural with nary a blink.

But the ratlike Minbari had already stood, intent on confrontation, carefully folding his napkin and leaving it in the seat he had just vacated. As he stepped into the aisle, trainees realized what was happening. They poked and prodded their fellows out of flarn-induced lethargy, whispered intently in various sets of ears, and adopted the general pallor of a crowd witnessing the passage of a pivotal, historical moment.

And, all of a sudden, Martel found that he was no longer hungry. Behind Mural, Malcolm straightened, and locked eyes with his Captain.

"Good evening," Mural sneered. "I thought you would still be in... debriefing." He rocked from one foot to the other before adopting that particularly aggressive stance peculiar to a confronted warrior-caste.

"Evening, Mural," Martel replied, carefully. "I'm afraid I don't know why you're blocking my way."

The aide - wiry and nasal, dressed in the nearly-formal robes that were almost foreign to the sensibilities of active-duty Rangers, extended his hands in the Minbari equivalent of a shrug. "We," he said, indicating the similarly-garbed Minbari at his table, "were just inquisitive as to why you even came to Tannier's death celebration."

A muted hum of voices struck the crowd.

"Stuck in that office of yours, Mural," Martel replied, choosing his words carefully, "you might not know of the human custom of paying one's respects to the honored dead."

If Mural's face turned any more sour, Cantrell thought, he'd turn into a lemon.

"The Rangers have no place for human customs," Mural replied. "We have no place for human cowardice. You -
you, Martel - dared to dishonor his sacrifice with your incestuous hands."

This caused a minor sensation amongst the trainees. They'd heard the stories, but they hadn't thought that a Captain would - even could -

Ah, thought Martel. The gossip round robin's faster than I thought.

"Let it go, Mural - the past is the past," Cantrell said. At times like this, Martel swore he could see the anger boiling behind her eyes - and, while this was a very good thing in the weapons pod, he'd recieved a black eye the last time he attempted to extricate Sarah from a bar brawl. And Mural, for all the desk-work he did, remained an excellent fighter.

"The past?" Mural hooted, a glint in his eyes. "You should have no memories past that day on the Enfalli, Cantrell. That was your time to die. The One called you to serve. And, yet - you walk - you walk here, and Tannier is lost."

Martel spread his hands, hoping that, by staying calm, the rest of the mess hall would see just how irrational Sindell's aide was becoming. "Mural, please. I should get back to my ship."

"Your ship," he said, quietly. "Your crew are unworthy to be called Rangers. Back from Beta Durani, and how? By becoming judge and executioner for Minister Kafta. Yes, we all know who he was. What he did. But you are a Ranger, Martel; you serve the One; you are not the One. You had no right."

"Perhaps I should have died there," Martel continued, trying to rein in his contempt. "Perhaps I should have offered up the Liandra, and allowed Kafta's secret to be buried under the ruins of the Beta Durani colony. Would that have filled your need for vengeance?"

Mural sputtered. "Go on, get out of here," he answered, in quick Adronato. "You and your woman."

He hadn't seen Malcolm. The intelligence officer slid through the back door as Martel managed, with great difficulty, to put one foot in front of the other, to open the door, to close it behind him, to collapse against the wall. As the door slammed, Martel felt the incredulous eyes of the entire mess hall shift their focus to Mural.

There was a moment. Just a moment, a silent few seconds, and then Cantrell erupted into a litany of swear words. Martel leaned back against the wall, fighting a roaring headache. Malcolm stood between them, as yet silent.

"You don't deserve that, Sarah," Martel said, hoarsely, as he straightened.

"Like hell I don't," she answered, staring at him. "So, is that where it comes from? Mural? Tannier? The goddamned Ranger Council?"

He deflated slightly. "You shouldn't have stayed with me after the Enfalli. I wouldn'tve blamed you for requesting a transfer." He reached out, placed his hand on Malcolm's shoulder. "Either of you. I'm an albatross."

She softened a bit. "No. No, David. You're not. I'll go and help Na'feel. I'll have the array done by five hundred. No problem."

He nodded his dismissal, and she was off, leaving him with Malcolm. And one question.

That wasn't very like Mural, he thought. He was a rat, he was a fink, but he kept his head in front of others. What happened back there to make him fly off the handle like that?
 
"You know that I have never questioned your judgement," said the Narn's dinner partner, reaching out to spread butter on a piece of bread. They were eating human food tonight - a compromise their wildly different gastrointestinal systems could actually agree upon. "In this case, however, I almost wish your judgement was wrong. It would be easier."

G'Kar laughed, heartily. He speared a meatball and lifted it to his mouth. "It was like seeing Sheridan command the Whitestar, all over again," he said, the grin tripping at the sides of his mouth. "That is the only comparison I can make, Delenn. It was amazing."

Delenn shook her head. "I have no doubt that by giving David Martel a ship we have made an investment that will repay us a thousandfold in the days to come. But you know my concern in this matter - you have seen the crooked shape active reform has taken in the past. The Interstellar Alliance is yet very young, and we cannot afford instability among the Anla'shok. Especially with this new enemy."

G'Kar folded his hands and nodded his assent. "You have never taken the easy road, Delenn, and I do not think you should begin now. Especially now."

Delenn picked up her fork once more and poked at the last meatball. "You're right." She paused. "We begin with the Liandra, then."

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I told you in the beginning that I'd attempt to keep this the story of the "little folk" on the Liandra and not bring in any of the big guns - basically because I don't *want* to write for Delenn or G'Kar. That's been done before and I couldn't do better than what's already passed.

But, occasionally, we *will* need to bring them in, because they're also, by necessity of who they are, involved in our story. Such as today...
 
Inclusions like this cannot diminish the story. In addition, the piece of discussion you chose... was well chosen. Having characters of different perspective, position and sources consider overlapping matters... may often reveal too much. When done carelessly, that may take story threads away from other characters. I have walked that slippery slope. It was interesting to notice how surely you avoided that.

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Hmm, reading this thread always make me crave flarn. /forums/images/icons/tongue.gif Might have to whip up another batch one of these days. /forums/images/icons/wink.gif
 
Flarn - bad flarn, mind you - always seemed to me like something you might serve the grunts, troops, and small-time officers of the Anla'shok. It's grey, it's nasty (for non-Minbari, at least), and you can probably make it in bulk. Quintessential cafeteria food.

The possibilities for flarn are endless.

Sorry, no flarn-fights, though. Or stuff like "get the flarn to the infirmary - the healer should look at it as soon as possible."

But, ah, flarn - beauteous flarn - you have already been quite the character device...
 
Well, I make bad flarn (or at least my husband thinks so) and for some reason, it is green and spicy. That just isn't how I remember it in B5 but oh well. I guess the Fresh Air Chef adapted it for human consumption. /forums/images/icons/laugh.gif

I kinda like it now although it is kind of gritty and can be quite mushy. I need to perfect getting it cooked all the way in the center without overcooking the edges.

Yes, my lame attempt at flarn is a good snack while reading Redux. /forums/images/icons/grin.gif

*nibbles on some flarn*
 
This may be the last Redux until Monday, 'cause I'm busy performing a lot this weekend.

I'm taking liberties with anatomy in this one.

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Of all the members of the former League of Non-Aligned Worlds, the Drazi, the Gaim, and the Pak'ma'ra were the only ones to not have evolved with Type I vocal cords.

This was far more important to modern history than any of them would have liked to admit.

Although historians and politicians lauded as pivotal the achievements of the drazeg who had broken the barriers of hyperspace and pulled the Freehold into such a important and influential spot in the Interstellar Alliance, all of the scientific, artistic, and political achievements of individual drazeg paled in comparison to the inevitable fact that, millions of years before, the Drazi came to sentience with Type III vocal chords.

When the League of Non-Aligned Worlds was formed at the beginning of the Second Era - just as the Humans were commencing their hyperspace travels and the Dilgar were not yet a threat - a common language was chosen for debate. It was universally agreed upon that the tongue of Human business would be used. Primarily chosen because of its universality and neutrality, Standard was based on sounds Type I vocal chords could make. Learning the Human tongue, for Narns, Minbari, Abbai, and others, was a fairly simple task. They had tongues, palates, teeth. Type I cords.

The Gaim, who communicated through what Drazi scientists considered a series of chirps and whirrs, decided to send their ambassadors with translation software. The Pak'ma'ra, although reticent, did the same with just a little kvetching.

The Drazi were another story.

Drazi vocal cords were similar enough to Type I that they could make certain sounds - gruff vowels, for example, and a few consonants. They had teeth, but no tongue; and the construction of their mouths didn't lend well to consonant-based language. To walk among the Drazi as an alien was to hear a series of deep-throated sounds, all incredible, all musical, an orchestra of daily poetry. It was completely incomprehensible and unpronounceable to outsiders.

When the requirement for the League to use human language for the League, drazeg were physically unable to make the sounds needed to speak the Human language. Some underwent surgery to give them a tongue and change the vibration rate on their vocal cords.

The Drazi would not go to the stars hampered by translation software. They were honorable. They were their own. They would speak in the humans' language from their own mouths.

Some could do this naturally. Some could not.

As a result, the drazeg who went to the stars - who served in the military - who did anything remotely relating to trade or government - could naturally adjust to the kind of sounds needed to create Human language. Those who could not remained in the Freehold, the new Drazi underclass.

There were those activists among alien societies that railed against the League's ruling, saying that it had irreversibly damaged Drazi society to a point where it hardly resembled the pre-flight culture, but nobody really listened to them. Every society, their detractors said, changed after alien contact.

Tirk, the quartermaster, cargo manager, and all-purpose handyman of the Liandra, thought they were right.

Tirk's mother - who had long ago returned to Droshalla's stomach (another untranslatable Drazi concept that he had tried, over and over again, to explain to his shipmates without using the words "vomit," "stomach," and "small intestine," which was as close as the human language came to the central axis of Drazi faith) had saved, scrimped, denied herself everything to pay for the surgery that would allow Tirk to speak the human tongue.

He was never very good at any of it. Embarrassment washed over him as he remembered his first encounter with his shipmates.
I lift very large things? What was I thinking? Oh, Droshalla!

It was days like this that he wondered why she even bothered.
 
Wow. Liberties with anatomy used in creative manner. /forums/images/icons/smile.gif

However, if you don't mind a nitpicky note... I think I recall his words somewhat differently.

:: goes to check ::

Oh well. Sorry for nitpicking, the difference is so small that I cannot help feeling embarrassed. "I carry very large things." Somehow I just notice such details. /forums/images/icons/blush.gif
 
Interesting ... and if JMS ever uses that about the Drazi we'll all know where it came from. /forums/images/icons/wink.gif

Have we ever heard a Llort speak? I get the impression they were always background characters to the make-up and costume department didn't give them realistic moveable faces, heh. I guess other Vree could know English ... we just never seen one that understood it ...
 
We haven't seen either of them speak. I even forgot what they looked like.

I could have gotten away with not writing that. But I thought of it, I thought it was neat, and I thought it fit the Drazi really well - and also, something I'm going to do with Tirk later.

JMS isn't reading this. /forums/images/icons/wink.gif

I'm soooo giddy! I just got back from one of the best performances I've had the honor of stage managing! Woo! (That doesn't mean extra Redux. I'm going to bed. Heh heh heh...)
 
SHAMELESS PLUG (begin)

No Redux this week, because I'm busy, both with my own projects and with writing an article based in the exclusive interview The Abyss conducted with Ingrid Kavelaars (Jeremiah's Erin.) If you want to read it, sign up for the newsletter at Monica's site... /forums/images/icons/wink.gif

END OF SHAMELESS PLUG
 
Heh, I'm the Monica she speaks of in case anyone else wonders. /forums/images/icons/wink.gif

The newsletter will be most excellent! /forums/images/icons/grin.gif
 
I'll be posting a little all day.

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As Tirk finished unloading the boxes that contained parts and peripherals for the new weapons console, he spied Sarah stalking across the tarmac. Tirk, setting down a particularly heavy carton, decided he'd best go meet her.

The loading process opened the Liandra's belly like a gutted bird, leaving her insides and entrails open for easier access to the cargo bay. He found the vision rather disconcerting, as Drazi ships usually loaded from above (wasn't enough room, otherwise), but forced down something akin to nausea as he waited for her at the top of the stairs.

"Your, uh - components have arrived," he called, as Sarah brushed by him quickly. He could tell she was tense - and very angry.

"Yeah, thanks Tirk," she said, crossly, dissappearing into the bowels of the ship.

Tirk stood there for a moment, watching her, before he heard a voice behind him.

"What's her problem?"
 
It was Na'feel, of course, standing behind him, as it usually was during loading exercises. Sporting an oil-streaked, dusty uniform, she was leaning up against a spare-parts crate. She pushed an inventory list at Tirk, adopting a perennially sour expression. "It's a wonder anyone can stand her," she muttered, scratching a head ridge and snorting. "Always so unpleasant."

Tirk huffed noncommittally - wanting to keep his relations with Na'feel fairly cordial - and rifled through the list. "I think we are missing something," he noted, comparing his last count to the totals on the delivery sheet.

The Narn snatched it from his hands, her eyes running up and down the screen suspiciously. "I don't think so. Everything was checked in. We should be done."

"No," insisted Tirk. "Loaded fifteen crates for you, ten for Sarah Cantrell, twenty for cargo bay supply, one for Shok'nali Dulann - I just done counting. We are missing."

Na'feel wrinkled her nose with an air of impatience. "You're supposed to keep track of these things, Tirk - that's what a quartermaster does."

The Drazi grumbled slightly. "I am keep track," he noted. "Why do you think I am telling you?"

Na'feel deflated, grabbed one of her passing techs by the arm, and shoved the inventory list at the hapless human. "Here, get counting." The tech scurried off, and Na'feel shrugged. "Incompetent nokheads over at Central. I swear, if we're missing the new toolsets again, I'll wring someone's neck. Right, I suppose we might as well count one more time..."
 

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