Joseph DeMartino
Moderator
I also thought the Erickson scene was somewhat cringe-inducing - not because it felt tacked on or didn't belong there, but because JMS just didn't do a very good job of writing it. Anybody can have an off day, and I'd say that was one of his. Sheridan's lines in particular were just clunky - but they didn't have to be. There's nothing in the nature of the scene that made clunky lines inevitable.
But in both cases, as I recall, the Big Bad Machine was on a couse the would utlimately lead it to Earth, and in both cases our heroes were in direct jeopardy from the thing themselves. (And, in "Doomsday Machine", an allied starfleet crew and ship are the victims who stand in for all the others.)
You're comparing apples and oranges - in the two examples you cite terrible events have happened off-screen and before the beginning of our story. Our heroes aren't racing to save the ravaged star systems, they're disovering the "bodies" later and trying to prevent future calamaties (which threaten themselves and their homeworld.) Of course we don't meet any of the dead aliens - they're dead before we know about them.
Regards,
Joe
I didn't feel that "The Doomsday Machine" was diminished by the fact that the star systems obliterated by the planet killer were completely unknown to the viewer - it was still the most thrilling Trek episode ever for me, eventhough noone we actually know dies for the first ~30 minutes of the script.
We didn't need to have a face on any of the destroyed planets in "The Changeling" to establish Nomad as a seriousley deranged nutcase.
But in both cases, as I recall, the Big Bad Machine was on a couse the would utlimately lead it to Earth, and in both cases our heroes were in direct jeopardy from the thing themselves. (And, in "Doomsday Machine", an allied starfleet crew and ship are the victims who stand in for all the others.)
You're comparing apples and oranges - in the two examples you cite terrible events have happened off-screen and before the beginning of our story. Our heroes aren't racing to save the ravaged star systems, they're disovering the "bodies" later and trying to prevent future calamaties (which threaten themselves and their homeworld.) Of course we don't meet any of the dead aliens - they're dead before we know about them.
Regards,
Joe