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<font color="yellow"> Originally posted by hypatia: </font color>
I can't remember which book, 2 probably, B5 sees the ship of the Technomages blows up, IIRC. Yet in the tv episode, the ship is shown quite happily entering hyperspace, isn't it?
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There are TWO ships. The first explodes and the second gets away. Sheridan knew some of the mages escaped. He knew Elric escaped. In the TV episode, we just see the second ship get away. However, it is unrealistic that if a ship exploded in normal space, between B5 and the jumpgate that we wouldn't see it in the TV episode. That part of Book 2 needs revised. I wrote to Jeanne Cavelos:
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<font color="yellow"> Originally posted by KoshN: </font color>
Remembering back from when I first read Summoning Light, I thought the Ondavi was slightly ahead and to one side of the Crystal Cabin in hyperspace when the Ondavi exploded. However, upon re-reading (p.317-321) the Ondavi exploded in normal space on the way to the jumpgate, Sheridan saw it (p.320 top), and the Crystal Cabin had to maneuver around the wreckage. This part of the book should be rewritten to fix this contradiction with TGoS.
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...and here's what she said:
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<font color="yellow"> Originally posted by Jeanne Cavelos: </font color>
But there is no continuity error, and the answer is very clear at the end of Book 2. Anyone who is confused should go back and read that. Sheridan *believes* that the Ondavi is just a decoy and contains only a handful of mages--possibly only one, Ing-Radi, with the rest being illusions. He knows Elric intends to go onto the Ondavi and sacrifice himself along with Ing-Radi. Ing-Radi convinces Sheridan that Elric doesn't need to sacrifice himself, and that he's needed to help lead the mages, most of whom are escaping on the Crystal Cabin. So Sheridan arranges to save Elric and get him on board the Crystal Cabin. Sheridan sees the Ondavi explode, but believes, as I said, that there were only a couple mages on board, and that most have escaped safely on the Crystal Cabin, to continue on their journey beyond the rim. He *never* believed that all the mages blew up, because Ing-Radi clued him into their plans. Only Morden and the Shadows were deceived. Hence, no inaccuracy.
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<font color="yellow"> Originally posted by KoshN: </font color>
> But there is no continuity error, and the answer is
> very clear at the end of Book 2.
Reference: Summoning Light, page 316 bottom to page 321.
> Anyone who is confused should
> go back and read that. Sheridan *believes* that the Ondavi is
> just a decoy and contains only a handful of mages--possibly only
> one, Ing-Radi, with the rest being illusions. He knows Elric
> intends to go onto the Ondavi and sacrifice himself along with
> Ing-Radi. Ing-Radi convinces Sheridan that Elric doesn't need to
> sacrifice himself, and that he's needed to help lead the mages,
> most of whom are escaping on the Crystal Cabin. So Sheridan
> arranges to save Elric and get him on board the Crystal Cabin.
Right. I got that. There is no continuity error in Sheridan seeing technomages further down the road, e.g. in A Call to Arms. Also, we'll never know exactly what Ing-Radi told Sheridan. We know only what Elric has surmised that she told Sheridan.
> Sheridan sees the Ondavi explode,
Only in the book. Summoning Light, page 320, top.
> but believes, as I said, that
> there were only a couple mages on board, and that most have
> escaped safely on the Crystal Cabin, to continue on their journey
> beyond the rim. He *never* believed that all the mages blew up,
> because Ing-Radi clued him into their plans.
True.
> Only Morden and the
> Shadows were deceived.
> Hence, no inaccuracy.
Not quite true.
In The Geometry of Shadows, Sheridan is in the EA Lounge ("Earhart's") with Ivanova, Franklin and Garibaldi. Sheridan's link beeps, and we hear Corwin say "You said you wanted to know when the technomages were leaving, Captain. They're boarding now."[1] Sheridan says "Thank you. I'll be right there." Then he tells Garibaldi, Ivanova, and Franklin "I have to head up to control. See you in a bit, huh." Next we cut to Londo and Elric, and in the background "Private liner Crystal Cabin is now in final check prior to departure. Passengers are to proceed to the docking area..." After the scene with Londo and Elric, we cut to C&C, and hear Corwin say the following to Sheridan "The ship carrying the technomages is requesting permission to leave. What do I tell them?"[2] Sheridan replies "Tell them, permission granted."[3] Next, we see the jumpgate activating and one ship leaving uneventfully[4]. There are no explosions and no maneuvering around debris.
[1] From the episode, Chrysalis, we know the links are not secure communications. Garibaldi did not trust the link to tell Sinclair about what he'd discovered about the plot to assassinate President Santiago. Morden's associates (informants) may have overheard Corwin's message to Sheridan here. Also, to which ship is Corwin referring? Is Corwin in on it as well?
[2] Summoning Light, page 318, lines 9-12. "That would be the Ondavi." So Corwin is referring to the Ondavi here.
[3] Summoning Light, page 318, line 17. "Tell them, permission granted."
[4] Presumably the Ondavi. But here's where you pulled the old switcheroo on us. You want us to believe that the ship making the successful jump is the Crystal Cabin.
Now, here comes the problem. Summoning Light page 318, bottom third to page 319 top third. Both the Ondavi and the Crystal Cabin are leaving Babylon 5 at nearly the same time. Ondavi is ahead, by about a minute, and heading for the jumpgate. So, both the Ondavi and the Crystal Cabin are in normal space between B5 and the jumpgate when the Ondavi explodes (Summoning Light, page 320 top) which we never see in The Geometry of Shadows).
1. In the Geometry of Shadows, we never see Sheridan see the explosion. (The same goes for Londo and Vir.)
2. If Sheridan had seen a ship explode, he would not have been as calm and
contented as we see him at the end of The Geometry of Shadows.
3. Surely somebody in C&C would have reacted to an explosion.
4. If the ship, that we see make the successful passage through the jumpgate in the Geometry of Shadows, was the Crystal Cabin, we never see it maneuvering around the debris of the Ondavi.
*That* was the inaccuracy that I'm talking about. Now, *if* both the Ondavi and the Crystal Cabin had made successful jumps to hyperspace, and the Ondavi had exploded in hyperspace after the jumpgate had closed, and they
were far enough away from B5 for the local sensors not to notice it, then Sheridan would never have seen it and it would have made more sense with regard to what we saw in The Geometry of Shadows.
Sheridan seeing a ship explode (the first paragraph on page 320 of Summoning Light) just doesn't go with what we saw in The Geometry of Shadows. He reacts in the book, but not in the episode. Do you see what I mean? If the
first ship, the Ondavi, had exploded, and the second ship, the Crystal Cabin, had made the successful jump, we'd have seen more of a commotion in C&C.
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<font color="yellow"> Originally posted by Jeanne Cavelos: </font color>
I assumed a passage of time between the explosion of the Ondavi and the Crystal Cabin's jump through the gate. In the book, all you know is that, after the explosion, the Crystal Cabin is maneuvering around the wreckage, and then we leave Elric's POV. I assume that if a ship explodes, they're going to stop everything for at least a few minutes before resuming normal traffic and jumps. So the Crystal Cabin will have to wait before jumping, giving Sheridan time to react to the explosion, along with the rest of the C&C crew, Londo, Vir, etc. Then the Crystal Cabin makes the jump and Sheridan goes into that speech at the end of TGOS. Clearly, this is a passage of time that isn't shown in the episode. Similarly, I inserted many things in the book that weren't in the episode. If people aren't willing to allow that things happened on B5 that weren't shown in the episode, then they obviously aren't going to like my book, but I thought that using that technique made the book a lot more interesting than it would otherwise be (and also more true to the techno-mages and their deceptive natures). Since I never show Sheridan's speech in the book, it's never established how much
time passes between the explosion and the Crystal Cabin's departure. Each reader can make it what he wants.
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<font color="yellow"> Originally posted by Jeanne Cavelos: </font color>
I suppose that in the book I could have had some announcement over the loudspeaker on the Crystal Cabin that their jump would be delayed by an hour . . . I guess I just figured people could insert that on their own, and I didn't want to break the mood.
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