No, you've taken that completely the wrong way. I've been following his project updates so I am paying attention, thank you very much for your condescension. My profession is writing and editing, a job I've been doing professionally since before 2008, and I know from experience there can be a fine line between just the right amount of information, and too much information, especially in a passion project such as this where it is easy to become lost in the details, without oversight from an editor or publisher above the author. Irrelevant of how much source documentation there is, it has to be distilled into a format that can be easily digested by the reader. It's okay to leave things out, but reading the updates it often seems like there's lots of minutiae and that every little thing is going to be included, which if that is the case it will just bloat the narrative. I'm not saying that has happened as obviously I've not read it and maybe you have, but your snarky reply does not reassure. It is a legitimate concern based on the updates and the fact that it has expanded to 4 books that we now have to pay for, which was not the original deal, and that it has quite massively overrun in time and length, all of which is a warning sign to me. I hope it is all great, I really honestly do, because that would mean we'd get an amazing book project and I'm looking forward to reading it. But from the outside there are warning signs and I'm hesitant about what to expect from it. As a 'donor' I have the right to express concern as anyone would over a project they've invested in, and to suggest otherwise is disingenuous.
[Edit]: to give an example of what I feel like too much minutiae, in one of Jason Davis' updates he sent some example text – it wasn't clear if this was an actual sample from a chapter or not – that was a description of the shooting of an episode. I can't find the update now to quote from, but it was along the lines of at 10.30 they went onto this stage to shoot this scene and the dolly grip did this thing and then at 11.00 then went onto this other soundstage and the cameraman did this technical thing and then they broke for lunch, and then after lunch they went onto this other soundstage... I'm paraphrasing obviously but it came across quite dull and lots of details I'd argue we don't need to know, like the exact shooting order of an episode or everything that the backstage technicians did. As I said it wasn't clear to me if that was an actual sample of the book or not, but if it is then that's the kind of thing I'm talking about. [end edit]
I don't mean to be unfairly critical or 'insulting', this is feedback from a donor. Jason Davis probably knows more about B5 than anybody else on the planet now. But some hard deadlines of when we could expect something (it might not be at proofreading stage, but in a recent update he did say he had sent it out to test readers, so that's forward movement at least and kind of proofreading, depending upon what the test readers do) and more details about the contents and what the book will and won't do would go a long way to reassuring me at least. I don't mind waiting for it – people's circumstances can change, unforeseen things can happen that can slow a project down, or as you say new information becomes available – but at the moment it feels like it's never-ending.