Ok, forgive me for not reading the whole thread yet; but here are my initial thoughts.
I enjoyed it greatly. The first story felt more like a real good episode of Outer Limits (exorcism in space) than Babylon 5 & I'll to a few in continuity problems I have with it. The second was once again entertaining, but I have a few beefs.
Story 1:
- No addressing of the PAINFULLY OBVIOUS first diagnosis the characters should come to in the B5 Universe: the "Possessed" is a powerful Telepath whose powers have just become active & damaged his sanity in the process.
- No addressing of the other issue that I'd have brought up immediately, but I'll forgive Lockley for not having done so since she was there during the Shadow War: the being in question is an old one bound by the Vorlons
- The quarantine & near planatery extinction 5 years ago didn't help Church recruitment?
Story 2:
- How... precisely... did "Earth" stop the Centauri Republic before? Their only two crusades of Galactic Conquest since contact with Earth were stopped by Londo (who also started it), while the second (Drahk engineered one) was stopped by an ISA investigation (via primarily a Minbari Ranger) & a mass attack by the Narn & Drazi.
- Cartegia had no heirs! Londo said so! And we know he wasn't wrong, or else there would have at least been an ISSUE over him being next in line for the throne.
- No one but Londo & Vir know who killed Cartegia. The "rumors" should point to Londo as the assassin.
- I'm sorry... I realize it's just ISN being stupid... but Sheridan won the Shadow War on a White Star, not a Star Fury.
- Minbar has a "ROYAL PALACE"?!?!?!! I'm going to assume that Sheridan was speaking Centauri there to the Prince and that was the nearest translation for the ISA Headquarters & Presidential Residence.
- I kind of hate the references to his previous encounter with Galen considering that we don't know how that turned out precisely.... God I wish JMS would do B5 comics to finish the Crusades story archs he had planned & do the Telepath War.
The reference to G'Kar & Franklin together exploring Beyond the Rim made me tear up a little.